Monday, June 8, 2009

My serial Novel Contribution

The corrupt universe
Monochrome

by Kuan Wei Heng

The night was pitch black.
Wipe-out was incoming.
Inevitable.
If only it happened in the day,
But it would still be unstoppable.

Then it happened.
The event horizon breached the Ionosphere.
Foliage uprooted.
Infrastructures displayed no resistance.
The dark menace rampaged the surface camouflaged.
Screams were inaudible.
Existence imploded at tachyonic velocity.

Then, nothingness.

~55 words~

Image source: http://www.exitmundi.nl/black-hole-lab2.gif

Comment - This M/F took me more than 1 hour to write! The first draft was 100 words long! I'm putting it up in my blog to let you critics see...hopefully I can get some encouraging comments!

1 comment:

  1. Death, degradation, end-of-mankind...I am seeing a pattern. Ever thought of sci-fi writing?

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